A return to childhood with Philip Levine, who is now in his eighties, and whose Detroit, before, during, and after the Second World War, has become a classic, frequently revisited setting in American poetry.
Unholy Saturday
Three boys down by the river
search for crawdads. One has
hammered a spear from a
curtain rod, and head down,
jeans rolled up to his knees, wades
against the river’s current.
Barely seven, he’s the most
determined. He’ll go home
hours from now with nothing
to show for his efforts except
dirt and sweat and that residue
he’s unaware of sifting
down from a distant sky
and glinting like threads
of mica across his shoulders.
In the distance someone keeps
calling the names of the brothers
in the same order over
and over, but they don’t hear
what with the riverbank gorged
with blue weed patches and all
the birds in hiding. Perhaps no
one is calling and it’s only
the voices of the air as
the late light of June hangs on
in the cottonwoods before
the dark whispers the last word.
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I like this poem — beautiful mood, clear images — but not sure what it’s about. What happened to the other two boys? Did they drown? Or nothing that dramatic? Were they brothers? Did only one get home? Can someone interpret, please?
I hate to love this poem!
It lives up to its title against the reader’s
mounting positive expectation.
At the end, both the reader’s and the poet’s
voices drown.
Sad Excellence!
I absolutely love it! Reminds me of my sons when they were small!
Philip Levine’s poem “Unholy Saturday” helps me recall my Saturdays along the jumpable creeks and rock strewn tributaries of the Agawam River in Massachusetts. Yes, the glint of mica flakes is as unforgettable as it is to remove from skin. It seems to lay in the pores. A good reason for a Saturday evening bath.
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that residue
he’s unaware of sifting
down from a distant sky
and glinting like threads
of mica across his shoulders
These lines give me shivers. So perfect. I think the poet is the small boy. Far from unholy, the natural setting and the total absorbtion of the boy is almost spiritual, perhaps zen-like, so absorbed is he in his evnironment.
“Unholy” seem the wrong word to describe this beautiful poem.
I see the mica filtering down from the sky as radioactive dust (satan) in the mix.
I think the reference to the mica is simply the dew. If one interprets it as something heavenly, fine, but I’m not sure the poet meant it like that. But such is the dynamic between reader and writer. The poem is actually quite prosaic up to this point. The poetry for me begins at “In the distance someone keeps calling…” The words ‘distance’ coming so soon after ‘distant’ is a bit careless, however.
Also the reference to ‘all the birds in hiding’ is puzzling since it is meant to be part of the reason the boys can’t hear themselves being called.
The phrase ‘hangs on in..’ is a bit awkward and could be reworded I think.
Finally I would have preferred ‘a last word’ or ‘its last word’ rather than ‘the last word’.
The poem seems to float along as naturally as the river the boy is knee-high in. It’s a vrey special song.
Beautiful! It reminds me, too, of being a child and playing out in the lake, woods, wherever I could get away. I was thinking the mica was the sun making it’s mark on the young boys as they fished. Of course they did not hear the voices calling them: they were too absorbed in what they were trying to accomplish. Nature has a magic that engages young people, especially…